Leonard+Carter

zLeonard


 * 1) Why did they have to wear gloves.
 * 2) How old do u have to be to box.
 * 3) How much do you have to weigh to a be in the heavey weight catorgory.
 * 4) How do you get money.
 * 5) Whats a illegl hit

=Boxing is a worldwide sport and here how it started.= = = = = ===What began as a combat between Greek and Roman empiers in local neighborhoods in 4000 B.C evolved into a world wide sport call boxing. Earliest forms of boxing was often or were fights to the death with spikes. Boxing was first accepted as an olympic sport in 688 B.C at the 23rd olympmaid in olympia. The first golden glove tournment was in 1923. For boxing the have diffrent types of weight classes are lightweight middleweight and heavyweight. Thats boxing.===

Leonard- You have a good start here. I really like the memory of the "Blues Clues" dog and I think that tells a lot about your mother. This is the kind of characterization that is helpful when describing a character. However, you could work to add more support to your character traits. I like the sarcasm as a trait, but you could add some more support to this. I like the description of her cooking skills, but I am not sure this is a personality trait. You could say the trait is that she is caring, and then talk about her cooking as a way to show that she cares about you and the family. Talk to me in class if this is confusing. ** Someone I know. **

=** Someone I know very well is my mom. My mom is 5ft4 and has blondish brown hair and works at First Nigeria. She is white, Italian, Russian, welsh, Dutch, and German. She’s mainly Italian you can tell just by the way she looks with her blondish brown hair. The memory I have of my mom is when I was little I would have this blue clues dog that I had all the time. Whenever I would go to sleep I would have him with me. I would lose him and start to cry and my mom would come in and find him for me. One of my mother’s personality traits is sarcasm. One time I asked her where the milk goes she said in the freezer what do you think anotehr thing she said to me is whenever i ask where somebody is she will say in my back pocket. If i say something elese she will say no S ** sherlock. Another one of her traits is that she is caring. My mom old me she would jump infront of a bullet for me and do anything and accept me for who i am and she is a awsome cook. Whenever she makes her breakfast you can smell the bacon sizzling and the smell of pancakes is like a kick in the mouth with her eggs you can taste the yoke and smell the cheese when she makes scrambled eggs. Thats a person I know very well.=

Ok Leonard- You did ok here. There are some good changes that you made. Lastly, I want you to read through it and do your best to change it to past tense. If you are confused by this, then let me know. THis is not a day to play return man, you have some work to do. Also, there are some sentence things there that don't make sense. "Go to work with my dad the usually thing I do in the summer." I like that change, but you are rushing yourself a little bit. You are a really great student, a good writer, with a great mind. Work hard man.

Someone I can count on.

Leonard- Good start here. I wrote some improvements you can make, but you have a good start. Basically, i think you just need to fill out your description. Keep writing and you could have a good narrative here.

It was the perfect day. Friday morning. I got up brushed my teeth got dressed and go to work with my dad the usually thing I do in the summer. Today is a very special day for me. Nice sunny and beuatifil We got on the dirty, sweaty smelling loud port authority. We reach the Science Center. I waited in groups or a mini café. I waited for a very special person her name is Lizzie. She is my girlfriend. She told me the day before she might not come. I’m so anxious that I feel like I’m about to burst. Meanwhile I was sitting across to this guy Matt. The creepiest guy ever he's 12 years old same as me. Lizzie told me that he was trying to hit on her and put his hand on her lap or put his arm around her Then I saw Lizzie. I think my heart rate increased. She walked over to where I sat. Then I aye matt trying to put his arm around her. She smacked his hand away. We decided to go somewhere else but he began to follow. I stoped turned around and said, "stop following us." He said he's just trying to hang out with his girlfriend. I knew he meant Lizzie.I walked real close to him and told him to back, off she dosen't want to be near you." Then are gal pals show up they go to the same camp as me.There Lizzie's and I's friends. We talk for while and then some of them have to leave so that leaves only one of them. Then more of our friends begin to come over from the same camp I was 12 at the time. We pick the ones we know a lot better than others and begin to make a plan to block out matt. We decided to build a barrier with people so matt doesn’t enter. We begin to walk over to the other building. The barrier worked great. Matt tried to enter but he never did. After a while he learned that nobody wanted him near Lizzie. But then he started to make fun of us.  When it was close to the end of the day Lizzie and I decided we just wanted to hang out just the two of us. So then we began to listen to music on her iPod. We talk and occasionally little pieces of paper or little metal balls on the cafeteria tables. Then we see are friends and they come over. We look at each other and laugh for no reason. Then and there I knew I can count on my friends because they were there for me when we needed them.

** Video Games **
 * Video Games bring entertainment to a variety of people everywhere. **
 * Video Games can be good because they keep children entertained, provide family time, and it’s just fun to play. **

** Video Games provide family time. **** Video games keep families together and bring entertainment. **** Video Games bring families family time and help them understand things. ** ** Video Games are just plain fun! ** ** Video games are fun because you can enter and play in different worlds. Video games give the player a chance to relax and just play any game he or she wants. Video games give excitement to the people in there life. Video games bring entertainment to a lot of people world wide. **** Video Games keep children entertained and them having fun. Video games kesp famlies entertained with there kids, friends and or others. Video games are fun. There fun and bring the user or users the exciment they want. ** = = ** What I am thankful for **
 * Video games keep children entertained because they will stay out of your hair. They keep them occupied and they don’t bug you. They make children happy and teach them things. They make adults happy and keep their children occupied in their free time. Video Games entertain people because their fun, entertained, and just helpful. **
 * Families everywhere can play games with their children to bring happiness to all of them. Video Games bring happiness to families and there children everywhere. **


 * Family is what is all about. **
 * I love my family because they feed me, put a roof over my head, and put clothes on my back. **
 * I love my family because they feed me. My family gives me food everyday sometimes I might not like itbut it is food. I am able to look in my frig and pick out the food I want. People make food for me and it is sometimes good. **
 * My family provides a roof over my head. My roof keeps out the cold so I can stay warm. My roof keeps out unwanted things like animals and bugs. My roof keeps me out of harm such as gunshoots and lightning. **
 * My family provides clothes for me. The clothes they buy me keep me warm and comfortable. I have clothes unlike some people who are less forunate. My clothes do not itch and keep me relax and comfortable. **
 * My family does multiple things for me they make sure my stomach is nice and full. Make sure I am not exposed to the elements because we have a roof. They buy me clothe’s so I can stay warm and comfortable and they do not itch. My family would do anything for me. They love me so much. **

** Monster **
 * Justice is served in steve harmon’s case because James King was convicted. for the murder of Mr. Nesbitt. Steve is found innocent by the jury. Steve starts making movies of himself. **
 * Justice is served for steve harmon because james king is found guilty for the murder **
 * They find james king for the murder of Mr.Nesbitt because they found out he either shot out of his right of left hand or he confeced. **
 * Steve is found innocent by the jury becasuse when james king is found gulity and that makes steve harmon innocent. And the juror calls him innocent. **
 * Steve starts making videos of of him self a couple months after the is found guilty. He makes video’s about his life and what he is doing right now. And how he has changed **

Violent Video Games Don’t Promote Violent Video Children.
 * I run into my bunker and reload my sniper. I go into my teleporter I see my enemy. This is for the final kill. I go into my active camo. I get shot 3 times. I take my sniper and shoot him strait in the head. Just like that the game is over. I jump up and down on my couch and watch the replay on my flat screen. This is the world of violent video games. **
 * Just because I kill player’s online doesn’t mean I will kill in real life. Violent video games don’t promote violent children because video games are in a digital world. Not in real life. Another reason is it can be a great stress reliever. Last is maybe they are pressured in buying a game from either friends or family. **


 * Video Games lie in a digital world. The closest thing you can get to playing in real life video games are playing in 3-D. But even that doesn't mean you are killing someone in real life. 3-D just means things pop out at you. Like a scary movie. You are killing a program not a human being with feelings and a heart. Playing really close to the T.V witch really doesn’t help your cause. You might go blind. Then people might think you are addicted to video games because your so close to the t.v. So no video game hopefully will not happen in real life. **


 * Playing violent video games can be good for a great stress reliever. They can think the person they are killing maybe someone they greatly dislike or just hate them period. Then they will feel better because they are letting out there emotions probably anger or sadness. Or just because they like video games. **


 * Playing violent video games can also be the product of someone such as a family member or a friend pressuring them into buying the game. They can start saying that if they don’t get it they will be a punk. Or saying that besides the rating such as rated M. Ignore what it say’s and play it. They can persuade them by saying the graphic’s are great and you will love the game, and you can play online if you have it with your friends or family who have it. **


 * So all in all the world of video games can be easy and hard. Parents have to always make a decision to let their kids buy little kid games or killing games. It’s basically the puberty for a kid for video games. **