Koran+Fleming

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=== //__ The boy you punched in the hall today. Committed suicide a few minutes ago.The boy you called lame. He has to work every night to support his family. That girl you pushed down the other day. She's already being abused at home. That girl you called fat. She's starving herself. The old man you made fun of cause of the ugly scars. He fought for our country. The boy you made fun of for crying. His mother is dying. You think you know? **I think we need to stop bullying because people is dieing over getting bullying,People don't want to go to school any more,It hurts people lives.**__// ===

=== //__**People is dieing over getting bullied.Why should they lose their live because of someone that they probably don't even now.People kill their self form people taking their anger on them.People are feeling like their nothing and they should not live any more.**__// ===

=== //__**People don't want to go to school any more****.So you want to roughen someones life and their education so do you want your life to stop.People don't want to go to school any more because they are getting bullied.People stop trying to leaner en what they need to learn so the can listen to the bullies.**__// === //__**It hurts peoples lives.Poeple killes their self.people cut their they lock their self in their house.**__// //__**Now you know how others feel,what they do and how they will react to when you bullied them, and i am going to give you a tip See SomeThing Say SomeThing.thats why you dont bully people**__//

= = = = = = = = = = =**Free Time** = **Basketball is a great sport because every neighborhood you drive though it has a basketball court filled with kids. This is why basket is the best activity for use of free time because you can burn colorist,you can make money off of playing basketball,it is fun to play.**

**You can burn colorist. If you eat a big diner that has a lot of fat then if you play basketball the same day you can burn it off .If you are about to go to work then you can play basketball and exercise so you can be happy and fresh. You can lose weight by running up and down the court. Don't sit on the couch get active.**

**You can make money off of playing basketball. If you go to the NBA after college you make a lot of money you should try it. You can take your mom and your family to go dinners and places that you couldn't go to be for. After you take them to the nice dinner you can tell them about your new big house then after that you can help her out if she needs it. It helps your family out when they need it.**

**After you get done playing you can have a heathly lunch.And when we was walking home we was laughing. We was talking about how we can get batter and what new moves we can use. You can have fun with your friends.That why you should play basketball.**

**This is how you can burn colorist. Now you** **can help your family. Now you can help your family. Now you can help chile with your friends.**

= Koran- Good start here. Keep up the good work. I would like you to differentiate between paragraphs. I can probably help you with this. Keep writing. = =Koran's Story=

===__//**"**////**Koran get ready your cuz is coming over"my mom said.I said ok when she said at 4:00.The fair in me when my mom left to go to work.I never would exspect what was going to happen that day.**//__=== ===__//**After that here he is right at my door.I wounder what this day going to be like.He comes in he looks like a nice boy.Then he toke off his coat and gave it to me and said, "put this away".As soon as i got the coat in my hand i said "wow this kid is crazy".Then he said "what a nice house"he said then i said "thanks".Then i said "what you want to do" he said "I dont now" I said "will i am going to play the game".Then i want up stairs then all you heard is bangs,thumping of the feet running,and things breaking.Then i said "what did you do" he said "running around".Then i said how it only been one hour.**//__=== ===__//**The mess he made was just teirble you can smell the dog and feel the toys on the ground and the smell of feet to.Then in my head i said this kid is caszy and I was scared because i didnt now what my mom was going to do to trey.So I tried to clean up.But then a knock at the door started to walk very scared then I wounder who it is as soon as I got to the door it open.Then it was my mom she said what happen I said "trey did it" she called "trey down".**//__=== ===__//**She saidd "you do this" he said yes ma'am with a happy faces.Then toke off her belt and beat him.The whipping of the belt hitting his right but and the scraming of my cus.Did you ever feel that your mom is going tokill your cuz.I was looking at my cuz when he was getting beat.With a said face.I wanted to help my cuz but then I will just get beat to I know that this story dose not seam a big deal.In my life it dose because I got to help my family when their in troble.**//__===

__//**I think this is a good place to end a with a conclusion about what you learned through this situation. Also, take a look at your narrative again and see if there are any edits that you need to make.**//__

**//__Koran- you have a good start here. I think you did a good job telling me about where you see him and you have started talking about his character traits. I think that you should add a little more about his appearance in that first part. I know that you see him before school and he is always dressed nicely. What else can you add about his physical description? Then, you can help you paper by supporting the statement that he always helps you when you need help. Good start. Talk to me in class if you need help making these changes.__//** = = =**//__Character Sketch__//**= ==**//__My cuzin Kholne is the most amazing cuzin anybody could ask for.Everyday when I walk to kelly school just before I get to school.I see him and he has a nice colorful designed shirt,his pants or always black and clean and he never sags.He always maches with his clothes.But most of the time he has chips when he crost the street.Kholne is a nice person.He allways gives me chips and i wonder why he dose not just say not just say no to me sometimes I wonder why.He helps me when i need help in live.Like this one time win i was fight with this guy he said stop.Then he said we should not be fighting we should be laugh togather.__//**==

==**//__He has three brothers,a sister, and a mom but I think his dad is deid.But sometimes I think why do I only see him in dose he have a job I asked. he said yes I said where he said Taf up a shoe store.I__//**== =**//__Research on Boxing__//**= ====**//__Boxing is a very popular sport.All young people like to do boxing.Did you now that back in 4000 .b.c it all started.They used to fight to the death.What they__ __fought to the death with is boxing gloves witth spikes in it.So it will be fear fights the had three weight levels the weight levels is feather,light,heavy.__//**====

====**//__Women’s Boxing started in October 1993 with its first recorded victory. Acting on a lawsuit filed by Dallas Malloy, a 16-year-old female from Bellingham, Wash., USA Boxing officially lifted its ban on women’s boxing in October of 1993. The first women’s bout took place later that month as Malloy outpointed Heather Poyner in Lynnwood, Wash.Now do you think boxing was importent back in the 4000 .b.c. now you try.__//**====


 * //__koran__//**


 * //__Question__//**


 * //__1.Why do they have golden gloves?__//**
 * //__2.Why do they train to box?__//**
 * //__3.Why do they wear gloves?__//**
 * //__4.Why do they wear head gear?__//**
 * //__5.Why do they need foot work and hand work and how to douge?__//**