Tierra+Stevenson

= = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = IPods In School? = = Kids Listen To Music All The Time, So Why Not Be Aloud To In School? Some Schools Are Starting To Let Students But Some Are Still Not Allowing It. This Is How I Feel About This. = = IPods Would Be Great For Students In School. They Wouldn’t Be Worried About What Other Kids Are Doing, They Would Be Able To Work Faster, And The IPods Has Every Thing They Need On It For School. = = Students Wouldn’t Be Worried About What Other Kids Are Doing. If Students Are Sitting At A Table And Their All Talking And Not Getting Anything Done, The One Student With The IPod Has No Clue What Their Doing So They Would B e Able To Get It Done. = = Students Would Be Able To Work Faster. They Would Be Able To Work Faster Because They Would Be Able To Concentrate Better While Listening To Music. I Know This Because I Concentrate Better To So It Would Be Nice. = = The IPod Has Everything That The Students Would Need. It Cost Money For Calculators And Computers, Even Books. But On The IPod The Students Would Be Able To Use All Of That Just With A Simple IPod And The Best Part Is That It Only Cost Like 300$, And That’s Nothing Compared To All The Books And Stuff The School Has To Buy. = = If Your Smart You Would Take Some Time To Think About What I Just Explained J = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = Tierra- I really like reading what you write. You have a skill here, and I think you should continue to work hard at writing. It will take you places! As for this paper, you have done a good job so far showing that you understand the basic concepts of the 5 paragraph essay. Good job. From here, I would like you to take a look at the examples of intros in your notes. You have a thesis here, but not an introductory paragraph. Let me know if you have questions, but not til you look at your notes. = = ! --No I Dont Have Any Questions But I Do Need Help With This Paper You Have Us Doing-- ! = = = = The school year should be longer because it would provide more opportunities for students learning, allow more free time each school day, and help students progress faster. = = If the school year was longer it would provide more opportunities like students would be able to participate in more projects. They could learn more than the average, like we could go deeper in history and science, things that interest students. Also they could get better grades because they have more time to learn and getting better grades and better learning will open more doors to more opportunities in life. = = The second reason the school year should be longer is because kids get more free time in the school day. Nobody wants to work all day, so by having a longer school year students won’t have to. They usually start to get bored, then tired, then they just don’t want to work or learn at all. So free help them relax and have some time to take a break. = = The last reason the school year should be longer is because it helps students progress faster. By the school year being longer there would be more days, which would be more time to learn. Students will also be able to create a better relationship with their teachers, and also their classmates which might cut down bullying. = = As you can see the outcome of the school year being longer is great. Students have more free time, opportunities, and get a better chance to create better friendships. This would be a big help in life for students all over the world. =

The only thing I heard was the bus leaving the bus stop. I raced to the down stairs level where the bus stop is located. When I got there it was empty, and the sound of the bus was gone. I sat down down in disbelieve that I had missed the last bus and that I was stuck at the mall.

When I woke up my mom was down stairs cooking pancakes and sausage. I could smell her Carmel coffee in my room making the whole house smell like a star bucks. “Amaya, Tierra, Alexa wake up and come eat” my mother shouted up the steps. After breakfast I asked my mom if I could go get my shoes that I have been begging for. She said “huh OK” and handed me 150$. Then I went up stairs to get dressed.

After that My mom told me that if I didn’t have a ride home to not even go, but I just told her I would get on the bus. “you don’t even know what to do or how to be on time” my mother finished “you better make sure you can find a ride” I replied by rolling my eyes and stomping up the stairs as hard as I could. I ran back down and told my mom I had a ride when I didn’t. Not even caring that I didn’t have a ride home from the mall I walked out and was on my way like nothing ever happen.

When I arrived at the mall I made sure that I knew what time the bus came. It was coming at 9:35 and was 6:40 so I had massive time. I did what I came to do, walked around, ate something, then I looked at the time and it was 9:31. Time must have skipped an hour because I swore it was just 7 something. I needed to be at the bus stop like now so I ran.

Soon after I ran faster than a track star at a race. When I got to the bus stop it was empty. I had clue what to do at this point. The mall was about to close, I told my mom I had a ride so I couldn’t call her or I would get in trouble. I called my gram to see if she would pick but she said no and told me to try pap. Then it hit me, I should have called him from the beginning because he is always there for me.

I called him and duh he said yeah and that he would be there in 5-10 minutes. After that day I understood a little more of how much I could really trust my grandfather!

=** A person that I know very well would be my grandfather hands down. **= =** His image is allways in mind. His tall, slinder shadow with he big glasses that make him **= =** look like he can see me from a mile away. He wears these ugly, old, black shoes that look **= =** like their one-hundred years old. **= =** My pap was allways a nice person. If you punched him in the face all he **= =** would do was say "EXCUSE ME" and walk away. Im not spoiled but he almost allways gets me what i want. Like if i wanted a new pair of shoes say right now, I wouldnt get them right away but maybe in like two or three days. **= = = = =

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Tierra- You did a good job here with the boxing report. The modern day paragraph should be a new paragraph. You did a good job organizing this paper. In the next research paper, we will work to add an introductory paragraph and a conclusion. Good job. = = = This is how boxing was in the past and in the present. =

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