Destiny+Mclemore

//**Destiny**// // w3 l0v3 y0u mR. b0LL <3 (you are too kind D-Mac :) ) //

Persuasive Writing on Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD) Did you know that 30 to 50% of individuals are diagnosed in childhood with Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD)? Even though activity it is a disorder, children with ADHD can still concentrate in school, have good behavior, and function correctly. Even though children have ADHD they can still concentrate in school. Firstly, if they take their medicine, they will be calm. The medicine can slow down your mind so that you won’t be as hyper as you are without it. Secondly, if they find a nondestructive way to move, they can also be calm and concentrate. Finally, when I have a way to move without distracting people, I can concentrate and do all my work. That’s how children with ADHD can do well in school. Second, Even though children have ADHD, they can still have good behavior. Firstly, if a person has ADHD, they have cheerful and hyper day. Secondly, if they take their medicine, they will be calm and nice to people. Finally, even though I have ADHD, I have learned how to be kind to people, by learning how to control my ADHD and not let my ADHD get in the way of my life with my friends. Finally, even though children have ADHD, they can still function correctly. Firstly, if they find a way to concentrate, they can do things correctly. Secondly, if they child learns to control their ADHD, they can control their actions and function correctly. Finally, even though I have ADHD, I have learned to control my functions, so I coordinate correctly. That’s how a child can function correctly. So, if a person even says have ADHD is a bad thing, THEY ARE WRONG. I say this because even though a child has ADHD, they can still concentrate in school; have good behavior, and function correctly.

Monster Essay

I believe that justice was severed in Steve’s case. This is because he is caring, a good student, and has feelings like any other person.

Steve is a very caring person. My evidence is that he is always talking about his mom and younger brother. This shows he has feelings. This also shows he would never want to hurt anyone. Finally, this shows he takes people and their feelings to heart. This is how Steve is a very caring person.

Second, Steve is a good student. My evidence is that his teacher Mr. Sawicki said Steve is outstanding. That he is talented, bright, and compassionate. This shows that Steve is too busy with his film work. Also, its shows that he is dedicated to doing good in life. Finally, this shows that he goes by life in a positive matter. This shows how Steve is a good student.

Finally, Steve has feelings like every other person. My evidence is that Steve said he liked the part of the movie when he is with Jerry. He said it makes him seem like a real person. This shows he would treat a person the way he wants to be treated. This is how it shows that Steve is a good person.

The People in Life I’m Most Thankful for Are My Friends Did you know that most people can’t live without friends? Well I did, and this is because friends don’t judge you, the go along with your craziest ideas, and they are always there for you.
 * No matter what you do in life, your best of friends will never judge you. Say one day you wear and rainbow skirt with leggings, a SpongeBob shirt, and a pair of black and gray high-tops, if your best friends say you they might stare but they wouldn’t judge. They would know that that is your style of things you like to wear. You would probably have that one friend who would love what you are wearing and want to know where you got the skirt and shirt. Also, what if you decided to change the color of your hair from blonde to brunette, they wouldn’t judge, they would just know that you are trying to be different. They wouldn’t also try to give you suggestions on colors that would fit you better. Finally, if you do something strange, like just take a pen and write love with a heart on their fingers. They wouldn’t judge you; they would just look and do the same thing to you, (only if they weren’t having a bad day). That’s why friends would never judge you if they were you best ones.
 * You can have the craziest ideas but your best friends will always go along with them. Say you want to play hide and go seek in the mall, they would probably think everyone would get lost and someone’s phone might die. Even though they might think all of those things, they would still want play. Also, friends might even go along with movie surfer. That’s when you get out a movie and go in another movie with a group of people when you don’t have a ticket so, the workers won’t see you. They might think you all will get in trouble, but they will still go along with you idea. Finally, maybe on your birthday, you get this crazy idea to have on two beds and paper. They might think everyone will get hurt but you all still fight. The crazy thing is that you aren’t fighting, you are recording it. That means they get hurt but u don’t. They will still fight. That’s why friends go with your craziest ideas.
 * One last reason that I am thankful friends

Love the quote at the beginning! Destiny, you are a very good writer and you showed an understanding of basic formatting on this paper. Good job! Keep up the good work in class. Take a look at the conclusions in you notes (movie going, cats, camping etc.) as i think you could add some here. But you did a great job with this. The only other thing I would say for today is to continue to strengthen your details with explanation.... I'll make an announcement about this. Good work.


 * The Best Use of Free Time **


 * Alexus Mackson once said that "singing is a good way to occupy the mind, by keeping it focus on what to achieve in life." People struggle with a lot of difficulties. These struggles can bring a lot of stress so, people need a way to release the stress.This is why i think the best use of free time is to sing. Singing is a good way to prevent criminal activity, show people your talent, and have friendly competition. **


 * ** It prevents crime because you will be busy because you'll be dancing or you might be at choir practice. You won’t be worried about anything bad because your mind will be filled we the lyrics of a song. Finally, you’ll be in the house or at school, so you can do anything that will interfere with the law. That’s how it prevents criminal activity. **
 * ** It shows people your talent because if you’re just walking around singing people will compliment your talent. Next, people might encourage you to go and TV shows you can show professionals and the world your talent. Finally, people that you might think are just regular people but they could be from record labels. So they might encourage you to pursue a career in singing. That’s how it shows people your talent. **
 * ** Its helps have friendly competition between friends and family. First, if you know people with the same talent to see who might be little bit better at the talent? It helps people have competition maybe even around you state. So eventually, you might even go to a national contest. That’s how you can have a friendly competition. **
 * People have a lot of things that happen in life. So they have to find things to do in life. Some people may think its a waste but according to this paper, it really isn't.This is how sing is the best use of time because it prevents criminal activity, shows people you talent, and helps have friendly competition. Also why I'm inspired by Alexus Mackson's quote. **

People in My Life I Can Count On. Have you ever felt like you had a day were your world was coming to an end? Well, I felt like that one day. I was out with my mom. We were leaving her job. It was very cold. The snow was sparkling in the moonlight. We were at the bus stop waiting for the bus. Then i heard it, "ringggg ringggg. Ringgg ringggg." My mom's phone was ringing and she had to answer it. Before she answered the phone she looked down to see who was calling. It was my Aunt Melinda, so she answered it. Not long after, she said “Lisa died today.” As soon as she said that, it hit me like a train wreck. The person that I was closest to has died. When we got home I cried for a long time. While I cried I thought, “Why, why did this have to happen? She was so young.” After the day we all found out, everyone was very sad. Everyone cried, but when person was crying the other was comforting the other. I was the main one crying, so my mom called off of work to stay with me and make sure I was okay. When I found out she called off I thought, “Wow, when I’m depressed she was willing to stay home to take care of me.”After I realized that she will always be with me, I got better and stopped crying than before I realized than she is with me. So I thought, “What can I do to make think about the good times that we had with her?” After thinking that, I looked at pictures with my mom, that were taking for memories. That’s when I realized no matter what happens, good or bad; she will always be with there for me. Now, until this day, my mom always supports me. Even if what she is supporting is bad at first.

Destiny- You did a very good job with this draft. I really like the additions that you made and the inclusion of the Internal conflict. It reads more like a narrative now. There is more description, feeling, and events that take place. Good job. I think the next step may be for you to add a little bit more at the beginning of the narrative. There could be some more development of plot. What are the events that lead up to your internal conflict. You have some of this already. Maybe you could add some sensory descriptions to the actual phone call. Where were you? What did you hear? what did you see? Then you could talk about what the rest of the family was doing while you were starting to feel the intense internal conflict. I am sure that your mom was busy with funeral arrangements etc.

 Great job so far. You are a great student, a great writer, and a great person. Keep it up.

 M y C o u s i n M a d a l y n  I remember it like it was yesterday, the one week I spent with my cousin Madi. We’re like sisters more than cousins. When we saw each other our faces lit up like Christmas. My cousin is 15 years old. She is really pretty. She has long, red-ish, blonde-ish, brown hair. She has very colorful braces. She not short but, not super tall either. She loves Justin Bieber, just like me! My cousin is always happy. It could be raining and we can’t swim in the pool and she would just be singing and dancing around the house. We could be getting yelled at for something and she would look at me and we would start laughing. Another thing is that she always has a story to tell me. I remember when we went to Hershey Park, and she told me about her very first time one the Fahrenheit. Then when we got back to her house she told me about how she couldn’t wait to go to the Justin Bieber concert. She loves telling me stories. I miss my cousin Madi because she lives four and a half hours away. Plus, we have sooooooooooooo much fun together. We love swimming, singing, dancing, and listening to music together. I remember when we where swimming and there was a spider in the pool. When we got it out she smashed it, and a whole bunch of little spiders came out. I miss getting on YouTube with her and we would watch a whole bunch of Justin Bieber videos. I will never forget the week I spent with my cousin Madi. It was the best week ever. I can’t wait until I visit her again. I can just imagine how much fun we will have.  T H E E N D

Question 1: Why are the Golden Gloves important in amateur boxing.? Question 2: Why is protective gear so important.? Question 3: What is important about training.? Question 4: Question 5:

Destiny- You have done a really nice job with this research. I think you are ready to work on some more complex research assignments. Academic writing is usually made up of an introductory paragraph that includes a thesis statement. This thesis statement provides the reader with a road map of where your paper will be going. It basically says what you will be talking about. Your Thesis here is ok. Then, you did a nice job with the next portion which is adding a body to your paper. This is where we explain what we introduced in the introduction and the thesis. In this case, you had a paragraph on the past and the present of boxing. Good Job.

**Research On Boxing.** **This report is about how boxing is a popular sport worldwide. This report will include the history of boxing. Where boxing originated from. Also, It will talk about the differences of boxing in the past and in the present (which is modern time or now ).Boxing is an interesting sport that includes both rich historyand exciting modern-day competition.** **This paragraph is about the history of boxing. One fact about boxing in history is that it started in 4000 b.c. between the Greek and Roman empires. Second fact is that the first proof of pugilism was found in Egypt in 3000 b.c. Another fact is that boxing was fought until one of the competitors have died. A fourth fact is that boxing became an organized sport in 1888. A fifth fact is that another name for boxing is pugilism. A sixth fact is that boxing boxing is a Olympic sport. This is the history of pugilism.** **This paragraph is about modern-day boxing. In moderm-day boxing there are 4 weight divisions. The four divisions are feather weight, light weight middle weight, and heavy weight. They wear boxing gloves, shoes, and shorts. Boxing is known world wide. And girls can also play boxing as well. The boxers train very hard to get where they are at. This is modern-day boxing.**