Jason+Williams

Justice is served because Steve is caring. And he didn’t give a signal. Steve can also do bad things sometimes.

Steve is innocent because he is a good person.

He is a good person because he works well in school.

First Steve doesn’t hang out in front of the store. Steve also has good grades. He also has a great family that supports him well.

Steve didn’t give a signal when he walked out of the store. Steve didn’t scratch his nose or anything to give a special signal.

Lastly Steve can do bad things sometimes. Everyone is not perfect. The bad thing Steve did was that he lied to the judge.

==== I can walk freely through my house. I can eat or drink at whatever time i like. I can bathe without people bursting the door open. And i can walk with just a t-shirt and pajama pants or under wear through warm temperatures. ====

All of these ways tell you how rappers cannot be acceptable.
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I approve this message = One day I immediately ran home so I wouldn’t be late. My mom told me to come home as soon as school is over. After that an hour later, I stepped in the door with curiosity. =


 * I saw a man holding my living room television, and all at once my heart dropped. Are we getting robbed, I thought. I eventually grabbed the mysterious man and choked him up. After choking him up the man said, “stop jason,” so I let him go and asked "him how does he know my name"." I have known you before you were born",the man said''. **


 * He took off his mask, and I finally let go and looked at his tired pale face. Why are you here I said The man said he was staying the night. I said for what, and he walked away. The mysterious man was my uncle. **


 * I hated my uncle, he would always eat all the food, and keep the television and lights on. ‘’what an electricity bill’’. One day my uncle opened the window and let my cat on the roof. ‘’how can you do that’’ I thought. My uncle can be very clumsy and annoying. **

You have a good narrative here and I think you are a really good writer. There are a few things you are missing here. You have a good intro, good quotes, and some good transition words. The one thing I don't see is a conclusion that tells how you learned that you could count on someone. This would add some length to this narrative.

Jason- I think you finished your narrative, but I don't see the finished work here. I am assuming that you just have to post it to the wiki from Word. Is this true? If not, keep working on it and I will make sure to take a look at it Thursday in class.

//__Good work here Jason. I think that we can work on adding some story or description to add description to Levi. You say that he is "So-so funny." I think you should think about a time that he made you or others laugh with his actions. This is a good start. Also, the only description I have of his appearance is that he is very short. You could add more description here. Work hard and you can be a good student. However, it will take hard work.__// //__1.This person i choose to talk about is my cousin Levi.My cousin Levi is very short,but he is still older by a month.His birthday is in march and my birthday is in april.__// //__We met at a family trip to kennywood.I remember when i was scared to get on arrow 360,out of all people he got on with me.Levi always been a very quiet and interesting person to me.__// //__2.My cousin Levi is so-so funny.We would go to mygrandmas and jump over the tree looking bushes.It is so fun when levi comes over.__// //__3.It is so funny because we would always rip on each other about old things we did,like when i got stuck in the bushes, and he got tackeled by my little cousin that is only 8 years old.__// //__4.Me and my cousin levi always watches robot chicken.It is so funny.We would also go to the store, and buy massive snacks for the night like pop tarts,hugs,air heads,gum ,and awesome chips.We would eat so many snacks that it would feel like halloween.But the bad thing is that my grandma doesnt like us eating all of that candy,so we would have to hide it from her.__// //__5.I would say levi is the most funny but interesting cousin of all time.__//

Boxing is an interesting sport that includes both a rich history and an exciting modern day competition.

These are some cool details about some historic boxing. 1.Historic boxing often faught until their death.

2.Historic boxing also used weapons such as spikes or metal studs.

3.Also in historic times there were different weight classes such as flyweight,middle,and light.

4.And also people in historic times fought with less clothes. (NAKED)

1.This is how people box today;

2.In the future (now) people box to win.

3.Now at days people just fight with fists instad of metal studs and spikes.

3.Also the weight divisions are different, they are feather light and heavy.

4.People now also box with clothes on instead of short with no shirt.