Kenasia+Cottingham

==-Do you know how many Kids get Bully in one year.I think Adult should do more to Stop Bullying.I think bullying should stop because if your being bully then you will fell scare to come to school and mybe other places they also wouldnt act the same mybe they would have mood changes they also might change the way the act toward their parents like being disrespectful and stuff like that.I also think if your bullying somebody then you should be punish for what they have done to other kids.I think that if your bullying someone then there might be a problem at their home.I think bullying should stopvbecause kids are going home and doing terrible things to themselves also they may seem like know one like them and if they tell someone and the bully find out then mybe they will do something even worst than what they already do they also might fell like no one Loves them.They also might be scare to even step out their house.Some people will want to kill theselves or mybe want to hurt others because they are being hurt.That is why i think bullying shoul Stop!!!==

**//Monster Eassay://** **//I think Steve is a good guy//** **//because he never did anything bad and alll of a sudden he just robb a Drug Store he go to school all the time get his work done and he respect his peers.//** **//I think Steve is a good guy because he never did anything bad and of of a sudden he just rob a DRUG STORE Steve is a good guy because he never did anything bad he probably never disrespect his mother and he never had a criminal in his past then i think he wil be scare to even think about robbing a drugstore.I also Think Steve is a good guy because he always went to SCHOOL and he was in camera club in his school.Steve join a Camera Club so that he can mybe stay out of TROUBLE after school.Also if Steve was not a good guy then wouldnt any teacher take time out their day to go to court for a student to tell the jury that Steve Harmon is a good Guy.Steve also respect his peers Like if he was a bad guy then he would be disrespecting his peers all the time and just would not CARE about anything and what anybody got to say but he do so that also can prove that Steve is a Good Guy.He is always thinking and talking about his mother and his brother to people and if he was a BAD Guy he would be Skipping School Cursing at his parent and others.That is why i Think Steve is a GOOD GUY and yhuu should think it too.!//**

**//Thankful Eassay://** **//The person that I am thankful for is my mom.Did you ever have a mom like mine?I am thankful for my mom because she brought me here on earth and i woundt be the person I am today also she makes sure I have everything that I need.//**

**//One reason I am thankful for my mom beacuse she brought me here on earth without her i wouldnt be here having a great life that I do.Also I wouldnt have the a WONDERFUL family and friends she a great mom i dont know what I will do without her.Thats the first reason why I am thankful for my mom.//**

**//The second reason I anm thankfull for my mom is because i wouldnt be the person I am today.Without her I will be disrespectful nice a nice person but she always taught me to be nice a to respect others.I also will not have home training for example if I went out in public a started acting like a fool acting all crazy being loud acting like I dont got any sence.If my mom caught me acting like that you WIILL NOT see me for like 2 MONTHS.//**

**//last reason I am thankful for my mom is because I would not have the thing I have know.I will not have any cloths my hair will not be done.I will not have have any shoes also i will not have the house that i live in now.I always would not have GREAT family (brothers,sister)and without her i will of never met my bestfriend Cierra.//** **//Nobody will every have a relationship with anybody like i do with my mom I will never go by her rules always respect her ilove my mom and i always will.Those the reason(she brought to this earth,i wouldnt be the person i am today,and she make sure i have everything i need)why i am thankful for my mom.!//**
 * // 5 parragraph essay //**

Good job Kenasia- I think you have a really good essay here. Nice work. You showed an understanding of the three part thesis and how to back it up. Now, you just have to add some info to the intro and make the conclusion its own paragraph. Because you have 4 body paragraphs, your final essay will be six paragraphs. Take a look at the examples of introductions and conclusions in your notes.

//** Television is good for teenagers because it give them something produtive to do with their free time it can educate the viewer and its entertaining and provides happiness. **// //** The first reason television is good because it something productive they could do with their free time like they do not always got to go outside they dont half to go outside they dont have to sit around and do anything .It can also keep them out of trouble.That is how televison give the teenagers something produtive to do with their time. **//

//** The second reason is that it can educate the viewer.First detail is that if they are watching the televison show Are You Smarter Than A Fifth Grader it can teach all different type of thing like math(additionsubtraction,mutliplcaton,division),reading,science,social study.Another detail is that if you want to laern a different lanude or something you can watch something that can help you laern it good.Some shows/movies can encouge you what not to do or not.That is how it can educate the viewer. **//

//** The third reason is that it can be entertaining to the viewer for example if your watching a good movie and then some of your friends come to your house to see if you were going to a party or mybe just to hang out but you said no because you were watching something that you never saw and it was very good and it was getting to the good part.Another detail is if your mom said clean your room or something but you said can I can clean it tomorrow or in 5 minutes and that 5 minutes turns in to 5 hours just because you wanted to finish the movie/show **//


 * // The final reason it that it can provides happiness like ifyou had a bad day and you want to come home and watch your favorite show/movie that is so funny and make you laugh nonstop. //**


 * // That might make you feel so excited just becaus you got everything off your chest.Then from that moment on you will not even think abot what made you feel so sad.That is how television is good for teenagers. //**

Personal Narrative Title // The person in my life that I can trust is my best friend Cierra so here way. // // One day it was hot and suuny and I was so bored that I will say and do anything.So I call my best friend Cierra and ask her do she wants to come over for the weekend and she said "yeah".So around 5:00pm she arrive at my house we were talking and laughing doing all he things we always do when she come over. //

// Cierra said'im bore lets go outside and go somewhere'I said 'okay"so I got dress ask my mom for some money then me and Cierra were on our way.We didnt know were we were going so we call our other friend Shakiyah to go hang out with her.So far we were having fun walking around then we came across our 5 friends walkng by the park so it was Me,Donte,Cierra,Shakiyah,Charles,Tyann,Joey,Hound,then we were just all talking in charles house tell all type of story and everybody was done with there stories then it was my turn to tell my story about when I did something that I regret doing tell this day //

// I made them promise not to tell anyone they said okay but like three days later mostly eveyone who I was with told somebody the only one who didnt tell someone is Cierra and Shakiyah so people was comming up to me asking me question ifmi didnt it or not and it was making me so mad because i thought that i could trust all of them but i guess the only two people that i can trust was Cierra and Shakiyah. //

Kenasia- You have a good start here.You are a very quiet student, so you normally don't ask for help that much. It is good for me to get the chance to read your work. I think you should look at the options for an "attention-getting intro." There was a class sheet one day on this. It was last week, I think. Maybe Tuesday. You could use dialogue, a question, an interesting fact, or a sound effect. If you don't have this sheet, I can get you one. After you have looked at that, keep writing.

Kenasia- I love that you used a simile in the first paragraph ("as big as the sun"). That helps with description. I also think you did a really good job describing the way she tells a story by flipping her hair and smiling before she ever gets started with the story. The way this paper could be better is through some more work at organization. Use the model on the board or "My Friend Liz" that I gave you in class. Talk to me if you have questions. This is an excellent start. You have some really great descriptive language and you did a great job painting a picture with your words. Keep it up.

New paper:** //The person i am going to describe is my best friend Cierra she as black hair a really BIG smile that is as big as the sun and she laugh over any and every thing just like me.I met her in lincoln at the park when we were like 5 years old ever since then we have been best friends.We did have our problems but we would always get over it because we are just to much of best friends for us to be mad at each other.// **
 * //I tell her everything and she tell me everything like she would tell me a story about how she burn chicken and before she start her story she would flip her hair back a for some reason she will have a smile even if the story is not funny but thats jus the way she is.She give me good advice about alot of things like boys,school work and if I got a problem at home she always got my back and I always got hers.I can count on her for any and every thing.We dont always agree with each other but thats how life is if we alwaya agree with each other we will never know what each other think.// **
 * //She like to tell jokes and once again before she tell her jokes she got a big smile people dont really her jokes but i do so people dont fine them funny and she laughs so hard and before she laugh she hold her breath for like 5 second then start laughing.She is trustworthly,honest and she speak her mine all the time.She is like a sister I never hadSome people think she is mean but they didnt get a chance to know her like I did.She is tall she always do her school work like one time I ask her to go to this party and she LOVES to dance but she said "No i cant i got to do my homework".I love my best friend we will always have each other backs.// **

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